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ToC. Ch 3: Pg 4

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--CAST PRESENT IN THE PAGE--

-Aidan Lithart, the Kadabra.
-Alphonse Kinsley, abnormally giant feraligatr.
-Leon Briar, Nidoking.
-Friar Goliath, Mienfoo.
-James Fernsby, Arcanine.

-Donovan Himmel, Talonflame (?)

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Sometimes, it's better to accept punishment for your sins than to just get away with it. Or that's what the Guide and the Kid say.

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Hm... I am not very happy with this page.
I wanted to drop here a bit of a moral choice for Aidan so that Goliath could act as the Guide for the first time, but it got widelly overshadowed by the rest of things.
Also, I feel that the colouring in this page... is not the best.
I also wanted to show James' funny character with 4rth and 5th's pannel's joke... but I guess that looked funnier in my head than in the paper.
I also wanted to show a bit of Leon's protectiveness over Aidan, but it also got overshadowed by the rest of things.
I also wanted...

Okay, lesson learned. A page is a page: it has its limits and it's okay. If you try to cram too much character development in one page, it ends up getting hidden.

But wait, there's something I like.

That talonflame. Dumb, silly burd...

hehe

EDIT: Removed "PMD" from the title.
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Battledroidunit047's avatar
James isn't that funny. He's just a suck up, and an Archer with no taste in culture. He's got the Accuracy and the Skill, but not the Intelligence.

As for Aiden... I suppose it made sense to own up for lighting the fuse, if you know what I mean. But no he DIDN'T handle the situation well; if anything the Situation was BEYOND handling!